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Midnight Wishes

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:heart:

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location
Golden Gate Park - nowhere special :D
date taken
April 12th 2011
Image size
800x800px 857.23 KB
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Vision

It has a very subtle blue tone that seems melancholic and at the same time uplifting. The flower is the main focus of the photo as it blurry around the image. The idea was great yet the use of negative space can really improve. What I am seeing is a lot of space around the flower that is blurred out. And You should work more on balancing the negative and positive space to help your composition.

Originality

One thing that make this photo stand out from the other nature photos is the blue tone which is a nice thing to see. I have to say it is a nice work you got here. Yet the blue tone is the only thing that separated it from most.

Technique

The image is very balanced in texture and softness. I am not seeing an image that is too nosy or too soft. You also have the blacks and whites so over all in Technique you did a wonderful job.

Impact

The blue affect was very appealing and wonderful. That can get some of the audience attention. As I pointed out before what you want to do to improve your aesthetics is balance your negative and positive space. I am seeing an ocean of negative space and you want to avoid doing this. What I would advice is cropping the image up close, take a closer photo and/or taking the photo at a different angle.

Good luck on your photography.